Comments: 160
JasmineAlexandra In reply to risingstar1011 [2015-05-25 19:39:04 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD! Thank you soooo much! I appreciate that critic & you got me so pumped. You really like it? I am blown away. I am so happy. I hope one day to make a story of comic of this.
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Katra21 [2013-11-26 09:39:14 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
I have been staring at this piece and its corresponding “hint” piece for so long I think I could burst from how gorgeous they both are. Having the two pieces side by side is actually what prompts me to analyze them because I feel that the only way to judge an artist is by their own work. Despite having the same basic imagery I get a very different feel from these two pieces.
So yeah, kind of touching on both at once here. XP
The completed turtle’s bride is so richly detailed, your ability to create different textures and patterns without having them interfere with one another is extraordinary. The only things even close to flaws are so nit-picky that I actually had to hunt for them. The shape of April’s wrist feels a little awkward, I think the bones juts out a little far, even for such a petite frame, and the lack of any index finger becomes more conspicuous the longer I stare. There is also one line of red highlight on Donnie’s knuckle that seems a touch bright, and I feel kind of OCD for fixating on it.
This image has so much atmosphere that I find my mind full of incessant questions. What is April thinking in this moment? How far along is their courtship? Is Donatello speaking off screen or is there a weighty silence? And also, just how big are the turtles in this instance? Donnie’s hand seems rather large I wonder how it compares with the rest of him? And then I wonder if the shadows were cast the other way if we would catch a glimpse of his form. Just how immediate is this fraction of contact and will it get much spicier if we could somehow watch what happens next?
I love questions, and few pieces of art make me as hungry for story as this one, however, with the likely that no further story will be presented I actually have say that the hint image is my own preference. The bold flat colors immediately eliminates any criticism on form and cuts to the emotional core of the piece, there is sense of clandestine that isn’t as heavy in the detailed piece. That said, what details are available in the hint become heightened, I can see every strand of April’s hair which is lost once everything is lit and lined, it really captures the rarely seen delicacy of April’s character.
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MrNintMan [2019-04-06 06:33:05 +0000 UTC]
😍😍😍😍
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bugsytrex [2017-11-20 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Stunning piece! <3
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FlashHarelKrash [2017-11-11 08:56:15 +0000 UTC]
It is probably wrong that I find this incredibly sexy... but I do.
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gordhanx [2017-03-18 09:01:08 +0000 UTC]
Uh, really great job, recreating the characters. They look great, with the feudal design.
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Spectraheart [2017-02-23 03:21:08 +0000 UTC]
You know what, I'M GONNA WRITE A THING FOR THIS!
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Heavens-Avatar [2017-01-03 05:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Both this image and the story attached to it are freaking beautiful.
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tealana1 [2015-11-25 03:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Love the artwork but I've written a fiction on this topic as I had the idea come to me when searching for Tmnt comics. But I named the title as the terrains bride.
April isn't the bride in my fiction as how I've created it that I will not say with one of the turtles is the lucky turtle to be married to my oc as the story goes that my oc reads about the turtles adventures in comics then one day meets one and her entire world is turned upside down.
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Rubye402 [2015-09-13 02:33:56 +0000 UTC]
That. Story. Was. EPIC! That was amazing! Mind if I write the full story y'know like a chapter fiction? I'll copyright you for the idea! Pwease? Is amazing! By the way what does 'Kappa' mean?
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tealana1 In reply to Rubye402 [2015-11-25 03:33:07 +0000 UTC]
Kappa is Japanese for demon turtle
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JasmineAlexandra In reply to Rubye402 [2015-09-14 05:45:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! You liked it that much? Well okay, let's see you do some magic. Oh man, I can't wait... link me please?
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Rubye402 In reply to JasmineAlexandra [2015-09-17 12:24:41 +0000 UTC]
To everybody else: The story is done! Look in my gallery!
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JasmineAlexandra In reply to Rubye402 [2015-09-18 00:47:48 +0000 UTC]
The story is done? Where is it? I was trying to find it... so there is a next chapter?
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Rubye402 In reply to JasmineAlexandra [2015-09-18 03:03:04 +0000 UTC]
I mean the prolog sorry not the whole story but chapter 1 will be done later tonight I'll get that done right away.
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Rin1animanga [2015-07-25 15:53:50 +0000 UTC]
Me gusta mucho tiene ese toque de encanto y pureza al mismo tiempo jejeje
Muy buen trabajo
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SheWolf546 [2015-07-15 03:47:43 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love it! It's drawn so well and I love all the small details on April, like her kimono, hair piece and her skin. I love the story behind it as well. It's so cute and romantic!
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katstories [2015-06-23 21:43:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is both a brilliantly draw piece of artwork, but a smartly creative idea for a story.
Kudos to you!
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risingstar1011 [2015-05-25 03:36:06 +0000 UTC]
I'll post a critique as soon as I can pick my jaw up off the floor.
Amazing. Simply amazing.
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angela808 [2015-04-18 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]
can u add the link to the story on here 4 us plz.
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nekojyuunishi [2015-03-13 20:47:22 +0000 UTC]
good god this is gorgeous!
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marigold-8 [2015-02-27 21:03:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! I was more blown away by your story! Is there an actual fanfic about it?
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tmntrules15 [2015-02-21 00:06:17 +0000 UTC]
is donnie checking out her buns or what
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goldenheartaly [2015-02-08 02:18:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome fan art. I love the original twist to it. Never saw them as kappas but it's a cool backstory for the picture.
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PrayerGirl1 [2015-01-25 00:20:56 +0000 UTC]
This is so pretty!! You are very talented! I love the story that goes with this picture! It's so fun!
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Cimorine90 [2015-01-17 01:57:21 +0000 UTC]
is there a fic of this? because it would be awesome.
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TheAndromedaRose-257 [2015-01-06 17:41:21 +0000 UTC]
Could I write a fanfiction to go with this? I'd love to have a take on it!
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