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Jazmin-Jazz — Oc Jazz in avatar state *-*
Published: 2014-01-27 02:26:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1604; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
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New drawing of my Oc Jazz :3 so I'll tell you ......
a small piece of her life actually a piece of conversation (/o.o)/
" Jazz's friend (boy) caught by cronies of "evil man": -Go away Jazz! I don't want him to.. hurt you... this is my debt, go please! Jazz : -I won't let you! ... Evil man: - hahaha! This is so pathetic, please kid don't get into what doesn't concern you, or I'll crush you like him.... I know you more than you can imagine... let's talk about your father ... how he abandoned you when you were a child... Jazz with tears in her eyes :- Stop talking about me! ... Get off me! ... You don't know me! * unconsciously enters in avatar state * ...YOU....DON'T .... KNOW ...WHO... I ... AM! *attacks* "
I'm thinking of extending her story
maybe yes or maybe not , we'll see it in the future I have lots of ideas
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I love the blue smoky bubbles. I'd suggest some more shading in certain areas on the girl. Nice work!
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Thanks! 
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Every pro started with practice~ Keep up the good work! And you're welcome.
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Thanks a lot! 
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Wow I love her design
I also like the blue water-magic thingy ^^
Awesome work, I really like her
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owww Thanks!! Glad you like it :3 *-*
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She looks really cool, but her right boot seems to be blending in with the background and I love how you did that swirly effect around her
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ahha is her left boot xD I should have done in another tone xD Thanks
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Her left boot not that much xD
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the left leg is the one that has that shine xD
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Good body pose and great base shades. You should think about doing some cellshading or soft shading on the girl; if would fit the sparkly bubbles graphics much better if the girl was shaded.
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ohh Thanks!
this will help me to keep improving
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I really like that flowing light effect, very cool pose too! I feel her arms are a little on the short side but I get a great sense of dynamic pose here.
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thanks
It needed more effect to be noticed
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Ohh I see. Yes, foreshortening can be a difficult thing to represent!
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Yep and I'm not so good at drawing yet xD so is more difficult to me xD :Huggle:
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Great use of colour! I love the style of the water!
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Thanks! 
The water was the most difficult xD
Glad you like it
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I love the detail in this piece c: The water and background are done beautifully!
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