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AnnihilatorX9745 [2019-06-08 04:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you could draw one or both of them pregnant with their future kids after Lumi?
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Burke23 [2018-04-20 00:43:26 +0000 UTC]
This is so good!!!!
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FireDav [2018-04-19 03:55:43 +0000 UTC]
I wanted to see Ahsoka and Barriss end up together in the last episode but instead we got Barriss betrayal and Ahsoka leaving the Jedi Order
Barriss and Ahsoka were the chosen one, we wanted them to end up together not a part, Be the first lesbian couple in star wars to live on in joy not in heartbreak
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GeneralMaraxus [2018-04-18 12:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, overall I love the piece. The lighting and shading, the patterns and crumpled lines on the sheets, very nicely done. However, Ahsoka's smile and face seem to convey a colder more guarded expression. Perhaps it's the rigidness of her stance or the slight upturned smile that reminds me of a sneer as opposed to a smile. Barriss's hair for me was the first piece of uncertainty I love the light outline and the individual strand beside her face, but the upturned ends of the hair, I don't know, maybe it's just me but something seems off.
I haven't seen the reference scene so this is what I take from this piece as an initial perspective. To close, I am by no means saying I dislike this piece, I adore these characters and the lighting and shading aspect you were going for works fantastically, I merely am offering what I, as an observer, see when I looked at this.
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Kjara-draws In reply to GeneralMaraxus [2018-04-18 17:29:51 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I do appreciate when I can get constructive critique since it helps me to improve later. It's been a long time since I had drawn this version of Ahsoka, so I feeling rusty.
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DarthDemolsis [2018-04-18 03:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Barriss: Pretty sure this is a large violation of the Jedi Code.
Ashoka: Well then it’s a good thing neither of us are Jedi anymore.
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