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jfoxr [2022-09-02 20:55:33 +0000 UTC]
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skullking2 [2017-06-16 12:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, wow that was Β a Myst storyΒ
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LDivi [2013-01-21 20:10:28 +0000 UTC]
Huh, should probably have read this before PrinceBuffoon's fan-fics, but still, nice to have finally read a story with Myst from her original creator. And a good story, it is ^_^. I should probably read it again sometime when I'm not being distracted by people making noise in an adjacent room XD.
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Trenchcoater [2012-11-28 01:20:20 +0000 UTC]
Quite interesting story, Kris! Good to see you producing stuff :-D
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Trenchcoater In reply to krisslanza [2012-11-29 10:47:17 +0000 UTC]
The rumors of my demise have been greatly exaggerated
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krisslanza In reply to Trenchcoater [2012-11-29 14:59:34 +0000 UTC]
So it would appear! Glad to see you around.
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PrinceBuffoon [2012-11-27 19:51:59 +0000 UTC]
For someone who's horribly out of practice, this was astonishingly well-written! I enjoyed the read very much, and Myst was a very fun character. I find myself wishing Alicia sticks around a little longer, actually - the Witch and Her Naked Maid makes for a lovely duo! The dialogue worked out nicely, and the descriptions were colourful - all in all, very nice! I hope you do write a sequel!
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krisslanza In reply to PrinceBuffoon [2012-11-27 20:11:01 +0000 UTC]
Really? I thought I kind of rushed things myself, but I might be really, really critical of myself ahahahaha.
And maybe... Myst is a bit easier for me to write, simply because she's actually an original character I made up for something else entirely, and I was lazy so I was like "Meh, let's use her!"
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