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Published: 2011-04-01 22:02:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2006; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 10
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Description "She located the source of poison, and partly study it’s properties before, so she could start to break it. Unfortunately she didn’t have an antidote on it in her bag and this process took a lot more time and strength. She raced against the time, feeling rising pain in her wounded shoulder. That was the reason why she was always avoiding injuries as much as possible. Her body apparently didn’t like to be healed later than others.

Finally, she was able to break most of the poison. She opened her eyes, sighing with relief. She noticed that he was watching her all the time. She felt that her cheeks getting slightly pink, but she didn’t turn her sight away. She pulled a piece of soft white cloth from the pocket in her pants and wiped his cheek gently, from the traces of blood.
- Calm down - she said catching his gaze. – I’m not going to eat you… - she sent him a warm smile. But before she could set her hand back on his chest, he grabbed her tightly by her wrist. She looked at him, shocked. It was painful."

"In the rain" chapter III by me^^


It's finally done! No, seriously it took ages to finish this one...

It's also the first time I drew something without using any reference (except myself and mirror but that doesn't countXD)

I decided to picture the most important pieces of my stories like this - I'm happy with the way it came out in the end, and I would like to hear your opinions^^
Please ignore the third panel - I killed Itachi there ...
Besides I never expected that someone who don't know what the words "shut up" mean, will make such a lame confession ...
I hope I will found time to sketch second page soon... Ufortunately, my scanner died... oh, sorry my brother kill it T_T... And I have tons of schoolworkTT_TT

Media: paper, pencil, ink pen, Paint.Net for coloring.

Patsumi Sarutobi & "In the rain" by meXD
Itachi Uchiha & Naruto by Kishimoto
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Comments: 40

katienator1 [2012-01-14 14:18:07 +0000 UTC]

are there any more like this one?

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to katienator1 [2012-01-14 17:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Well this is just anillustration to my fanfic I was planning on doing more, but right now, when story has changed I need to re-did this page too^^

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meynari [2011-04-03 10:59:33 +0000 UTC]

znowu, dobra robota świetne, niesamowite, zayebiste, ... niech to szlaaag... odpowiedniego przymiotnika nie mogę znaleźć! > < xD zazdroszczę Ci talentu x3

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-03 21:35:52 +0000 UTC]

Ja widzę przymiotników w nadmiarze Dzięki wielkie!^^ Cholera... Jestem nieprzyzwyczajona do takich komplementów

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-04 13:48:18 +0000 UTC]

To się przyzwyczajaj moja droga! :3

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-04 19:12:28 +0000 UTC]

To potrwa...

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-04 19:28:43 +0000 UTC]

-.-... nie bądź taka skromna!

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-04 21:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Cóż taka moja natura^^ Ale jak mnie dalej będziesz tak rozpieszczać,to popadnę w samozachwyt

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-05 07:38:26 +0000 UTC]

to popadaj! xD będzie on słuszny ^^

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-05 22:41:51 +0000 UTC]

jeszcze się zastanowię

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-07 11:37:06 +0000 UTC]

to czekam na twą decyzję xD ahm... to raczej nie twój profil na poszkole? = [link] O_o

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-07 16:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Nie, bynajmniej nie mój -_-.... Grrr, ja nie mogę z tymi ludźmi chwilami... Dobrze, że jeszcze opowiadań nie kradną...
A co do decyzji, to się jeszcze zastanawiam Nie chcę wyjść na zarozumiałą -///-

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-07 16:48:44 +0000 UTC]

szujee... -____- wiesz... załóż sobie oficjalne konto na poszkole, to może przestaną kraść. radzę, bo znalazłam ostatnio szajski blog z takimi postaciami jak : twoja Mimiko, Patsumi i Shin, Sawaii, Ayame Mashibą.
stwierdzę że zapewne te postacie były tam umieszczone bez zgody O__O i mnóstwo fotek rpc i gifów.

co do twej decyzji : nadal cierpliwie czekam > XD a tak w ogóle to Lenka jestem : D

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-08 15:33:13 +0000 UTC]

no niestety...-__- nie mam w zasadzie po co zakładać konta na poszkole, moi znajomi raczej tam nie bywają I to i tak nic nie pomoże. Mało tego jeszcze mnie oskarżą o kradzież
Ale mogłąbyś mi może podesłać linka do tego bloga? Lubię się pośmiaćXDD
No i cóż...tylko kilka osób ma moje oficjalne pozwolenie Z tego co wiem tylko jedna jest Polką^^

To sobie poczekasz
A ja Justyna^^

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-08 15:40:34 +0000 UTC]

[link] <--- adres tego bloga XD dosłownie : lałam w gacie ze śmiechu O__O po prostu to pisze jakieś 10-cio letnie dziecko, xD

łaa! ale masz ładne imię miło mi poznać ^^

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-08 17:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Och...*czyta*...Uch...*próbuje czytać dalej* ... NIEE NIE MOGĘ! To godzi w mój dobry gust. Chciałabym poznać kogoś, kto nie wstydzi się tego wrzucać do sieci

Mamo,skąd się biorą tacy ludzie? Moja biedna Mimiko

Dziękuję I wzajemnie

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-08 17:13:46 +0000 UTC]

biedna Mimi...! .__. to coś... eee... too... opowiadanie, powala nieprawdaż? XD

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to meynari [2011-04-08 17:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Na oba kolanaXD W życiu nie czytałam nic tak... oryginalnego
Moje oczy krwawią!...

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meynari In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-08 17:34:19 +0000 UTC]

niee! nie wykrwaw się! T__T aa! XD

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Myttens [2011-04-02 19:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Woah this is really really great love it well done!!!

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to Myttens [2011-04-02 20:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!

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Akiauchi [2011-04-02 16:15:16 +0000 UTC]

This is really good

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to Akiauchi [2011-04-02 20:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much dear!

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Akiauchi In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-02 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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xKoritenshix [2011-04-02 12:47:26 +0000 UTC]

It looks very amazing Mimi-chan

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to xKoritenshix [2011-04-02 20:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Thank you very much!

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xKoritenshix In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-03 17:47:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. x3

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RaikSoul [2011-04-02 12:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Your writing and the way you organize the story is just awesome. You should write a book

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to RaikSoul [2011-04-02 20:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, writing is something that is truly enjoying for me - I also have a project of original story, I wish to write it one day...
Honestly, if I could,I would connect my future life with writing, but there is no way that my parents is going to accept that choice from me unfortunatelyT^T...

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RaikSoul In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-03 09:45:16 +0000 UTC]

It's not their choice, it's yours.

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to RaikSoul [2011-04-03 21:32:09 +0000 UTC]

I know that, but apparently they don't...

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RaikSoul In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-05 17:56:03 +0000 UTC]

They need to know D:

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neenachii [2011-04-02 04:03:56 +0000 UTC]

omg! omg! omg! this is so cool!!!

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to neenachii [2011-04-02 20:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much dear!

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neenachii In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-03 05:18:40 +0000 UTC]

i'm be waiting for the next one

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x-ChuChuNyaNyaYuYu-x [2011-04-02 01:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...whoa, whoa, whoa. o-o;

Justine, this is awesome!!!!!!!!!! And you didn't kill Itachi in the third panel! He looks fine! This comic strip is rlly awesome. I wish I had your talent.

Anyway, it's really good.

You did a good job on both Pat and Itachi. ^^ The colors are really amazing of course. Also, the BG is rlly, rlly, rlly great in panel 2. ^^ Also, it's good that you didn't use any references for this comic strip. ^^ It looks good.

Plus, I'm sorry your brother killed your scanner. One time my little brother messed w/ my laptop and almost murdered it. XD Luckily it survived.

I can't wait for the second page if you have the time to do the 2nd one.

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to x-ChuChuNyaNyaYuYu-x [2011-04-02 20:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Awww.... Thank you!
I know he could look better, I hope he would next time
My talent is just practice - but I have to say that every woman on my mom side of family has some artistic skills^^ Compering to my causin I'm lame - she can draw perfect human in 15 minutes (why she isn't me?? TT^TT)

Though, I'm proud of coloring and last three panels (Pat's lips are awesome ) And I'm beyond happy, cause I drew everything without reference

My brothers are simply eil creatures^^ One of them spill water on my laptop almost killing it (and allmy files T^T) and now he broke a "very important device" I really wish to be the only child sometime. But on the contrary it would be really borring to not have them around^^

Second page is on hold now - I have my job this weekend and test on Monday - and I think I'm going to smash something to let my frustration out...

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KirCorn [2011-04-01 22:26:22 +0000 UTC]

awww really beautiful *W*

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Mimiko-Flamemaker In reply to KirCorn [2011-04-01 22:33:11 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much!

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KirCorn In reply to Mimiko-Flamemaker [2011-04-02 01:28:52 +0000 UTC]

no problem dear

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