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RackofRibs — ...A Tell-Tale Heart...

Published: 2007-03-20 00:11:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1250; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 31
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Please, take your time to take in the full details of the picture...I'm way to proud of it not to be faved/commented on...
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I'll type what I can before I have to leave for my Volleyball game...( We lost... but it was SOOO CLOSE!!))
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You're walking through a vast, almost endless seeming, field. It was late at night and the grass swayed gently in the breeze. As you walked deeper, you notice some grass was bent, and in unnatural positions. Many thoughts to what might have caused this ran through your head. As you continue, more and more of these 'spots' are visable and they are growing larger, surounding you. Some have blood stains, some have grass ripped from the ground. In the distance, two shadowy figures can be seen. And several disappearing behind one of rolling hills.

You cauciously approch. A whining can now be heard. It was harsh yet gental, sharp yet innocent all in one. You near closer and the colors are visable because both you and the moon have moved. The low tones became louder-- even louder-- so haunting. You get close enough to notice blood- large, massive amounts of blood surounding the two figures. The one figure to your left was now white. It shivered and wimpered. You're careful not to startle it as you walk around to it's front. It staried at you deeply, with frightened, nervous eyes-- Oh, so terrified is sent shivers up your spine.

It tried to get away from you, but acted as if too tired and injured. It then struck you. How could you not have noticed. The whole front part of it's body is covered and stained in blood. You look over to the other figure, a brown wolf, also covered in blood. But it ran down it's back. Even if you didn't go to check, you knew it had bled to death now. You hold your hand out to the frightened white wolf. It gently places it's head on your hand, closes it's eyes, tears fell down it's face, and died. For now, you can only wonder what happened to them.
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Lol.. well thats it. Hmm... I'm really proud how the paws turned out and the fur just the same. I dried my own way of fur... AND IT ACTUALLY LOOKED HALF DECENT!! Can you believe that?? xDDDDD

The fce could have turned out better... and I could have spent more time on the background and the dead wolf... -_-

Other than that, there isn't much to say. I wrote the little story because we are reading "A Tell-Tale Heart" by Edgar Allan Poe in Lit class, and I like the way he writes. He writes misteries... I like 'em... =3


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HydeCorner [2010-11-21 23:28:14 +0000 UTC]

I certainly like the way you wrote this story. It shows that the killer is self aware and is confident that he won't get caught. Nice pic as well.

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RackofRibs In reply to HydeCorner [2010-11-21 23:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much~
I rarely get comments on my writing. :3
-made my day-

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HydeCorner In reply to RackofRibs [2010-11-21 23:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome.I love The Tell-Tale Heart.

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sydneydc [2009-01-14 05:12:15 +0000 UTC]

This is an amazing picture.

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RackofRibs In reply to sydneydc [2009-01-14 23:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! :3

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Grim-Piggles [2008-11-02 20:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Very poetic and wonderfully done! Poor things. *faves*

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DiscerningGhost [2008-04-24 01:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Omg I'm crying at the end of the story T.T I feel so sad when i read the end

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Savanahrocks522 [2008-04-12 18:30:54 +0000 UTC]

I love the detail!

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RackofRibs In reply to Savanahrocks522 [2008-04-12 23:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for the fave as well.

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Savanahrocks522 In reply to RackofRibs [2008-04-12 23:29:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! The wolves look so fluffy- this deserves more reconition than it's getting.

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WhiteWolfMystic [2007-08-07 14:29:38 +0000 UTC]

It really comes alive in full view!

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audaciously [2007-03-29 01:52:38 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty. =o Very well done.

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RackofRibs In reply to audaciously [2007-03-29 01:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks so much!!<3

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Bandarai [2007-03-24 18:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Awww, gorgeous piece!

I love all the details, makes it look so real!
Awesome job on the shading, too! ^_^

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RackofRibs In reply to Bandarai [2007-03-24 18:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks so much!! =3

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Bandarai In reply to RackofRibs [2007-03-24 18:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Hikaru-Tenshi [2007-03-21 02:31:08 +0000 UTC]

=000000
WONDERFUL!
It's stunning and beautiful < 3

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RackofRibs In reply to Hikaru-Tenshi [2007-03-22 04:20:28 +0000 UTC]

The sketch to this, believe it or not was suposed to be Terra, but it was getting all too complicated... -_-
=3
Thanks <3

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EbilKitsune [2007-03-20 00:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Like, totally beautiful. :'D

-faves-

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RackofRibs In reply to EbilKitsune [2007-03-20 02:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.. means so much.. =3

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Faeora [2007-03-20 00:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! This is gorgeously detailed!!! I love the shading <33

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RackofRibs In reply to Faeora [2007-03-20 02:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww... thanks Fae... Glad you like it..

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Siemari [2007-03-20 00:20:39 +0000 UTC]

The fur and anatomy is just awesome! 8D Wow!! And the blood staines are very well done :> AMAZING JOB!!!!! *3*

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THE END...
Smexy icon made by ~extradite

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RackofRibs In reply to Siemari [2007-03-20 02:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you so much, Mari... I tried my own way of doing the fur this time.. I think it actually turned out nicely... =3 And I was really carefull about the anatomy..

Thanks.. <3

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Argai [2007-03-20 00:19:07 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! Emm you did an excellent job on this!! 8DDD I loooove the face and the blood stains in the grass. oh and ze PAAWWSS, EYES, AND MOOOOOON!!! *0*

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RackofRibs In reply to Argai [2007-03-20 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]

I liked the paws and face too.. =3

The others either took so long I don't like them by now.. or they aren't good in my eyes.. liek the eyes.. XDDDDD

Thanks Neko... <3

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Ilyana88 [2007-03-20 00:14:46 +0000 UTC]

I love the blood effect, so subtle. Well done I love it ^_^

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RackofRibs In reply to Ilyana88 [2007-03-20 02:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.. I really tried not to overdue the blood like some people..

Thanks a lot! <3

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Ryuno-san [2007-03-20 00:14:40 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL <333

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RackofRibs In reply to Ryuno-san [2007-03-20 02:24:11 +0000 UTC]

<3333.... Thank you.. ^^

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