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Published: 2012-02-04 03:59:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 462; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 5
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Louie you really need to lay off the booze.PS: if anyone ever has any critiques or advice they'd like to share on any of these pages, don't hesitate to dole it out! I'd love to improve the comic in any way I can, and it doesn't take a professional chef to know that something's wrong with the food. If you see something that looks wrong, let me know what it is and how I should fix it, and I'll do my best to do so.
Like Mr. Tall Guy/Mr. Paper Towel's neck. I couldn't for the life of me get that darn head-tilt to look right. Help would very much be appreciated there.
PSS: it is rly rly dumb that people without subs can't automatically ask for critiques I mean wow I thought this was an art site
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Poor Louie :c all that teleporting and chasing Chip around has tired him right out
Love how big everyone's eyes got at the end of the strip XD
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towel guy has new never before seen font color!11!
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its been seen before bby u just have 2 look
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no it hsnt ariana kun word is lw!!
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I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS. But I'm too tired to comment properly. And probably will forget to get back to it because I'm a derp. But I just wanted to say I love this and I love Mr. Paper Towel.
Kbyeilu.
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GET SOME SLEEP QURL.
Thanks and Mr. Paper Towel and I love you too. ;3 <333
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OKAY. NOW THAT I GOT SOME.
This fabulous. The shading. The characters. Akjfgdsabgjdfs;g.
Only thing I can suggest for Mr. PT's neck is a little more curve to it. Or try tilting your head and referencing off that.
Ffffffff I love you most~
Ignore the last line I like just listened to Mother Knows Best and she says that at the end. *rolls around and away*
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dfjlksjljs!
Okay, tried to curve his neck a bit more! Still looks a bit off to me for whatever reason, but definitely looks better than before. Thank you for you input~~ <3
omg Mother Knows Best is like my favorite song from Tangledsdsjhjkgsdfff
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Whee! Glad to help. <333
hdfgufdbg I know, I love the reprise so much.
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Mr. Tall Guy/Mr. Paper Towel You make me so happy. |'D
-Cough- Anyway... "I'M THE BABYSITTER NOW, KIDS, AND I SAY we raid his pockets and take his shit. QUICKLYBEFOREHEWAKESUP."
...... Louie, you should stop writing with your blood. This will happen more often. Use ink or lead like a normal human being/skull person.
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I'm glad hun uvu <3
AH YES BEST BABYSITTER.
and f that noise Louie does what he wants!
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DA just wants your money.
FWOMP! -- when someone passes out, you kids should know what to do! C'mooon it's too dark for him to notice anything you do to him at this point...
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P much!
QUICK BREAK OUT THE MAGIC MARKER SET.
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