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RotherdaleEmperor — Elric at war 'tweaked'
Published: 2009-05-31 14:50:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1780; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 41
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I've taken some of the advise given and tried to make this look better (up to you if you think it helped XD) done some tweaking on the gun to get the alinement (sp?) right, but i haven't changed the grip yet.I've also tried to make the arm a little better, it's supposed to look like its coming out sideways abit, rather than just look like its short -_-, also added a bit of shading to see if you think it looks right, but not a huge amount since its gonna be done in colour anyway.
Anyway see what you think, and all sugestions are more than welcome, BE BRUTAL!! (also my uncle thinks he looks like micheal jackson -.-...Ed would kill him if he heard that...)
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Not that i think it looks like Michael Jackson though, just saying. It looks really good except the cat looks like it was drawn over the hand, you know, like a cut and paste. the elements need to be combined there a little bit but other than that it is great! Keep it up! i think it looks terrific in pencil.
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thankyou! an i'll work on the cat, i was ignoring it a bit in favour of Ed, i feel all cruel now...
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its okay, i wont hold it against you. as long as you aren't abusing any animals then it doesn't really matter.
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nope never don't worry, i'll get it a little cat toy and everything, and ed's paying attention to it
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good. i get mine too many toys. i think i have spent more money on them lately.
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At least he would be tall though if he was Michael Jackson
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cool drawing but the MJ comment was out of line i give ur drawing 4 stars out of five xD
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haha awsome XD cheer! ^-^
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This looks effortless 
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thank you so much!! and i luv cats, couldn't not draw one 
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lol, thank you
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really like your ease of detail and casual stance.
works really well.
i would perhaps increase the size of the hand and possibly feet. might flesh it out somewhat.
you certainly have great talent and is worth keeping up.
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thank you very much!!! ^-^ always have been terrible at the feet an hands, but i'm workin on it!!! thankz again!!
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Brilliant <3 Looks like you worked hard on it 
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MICHEAL JACKSON !!!!! OMG !!!!! Is he blind ??? huh
Sorry ^^
But WOOOOOOOOOOW IT'S REALLLLLLLY PERFECT ^^
Don't change anything it's just really freakingly awesomely gorgeous
He is sooo cute ^^
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yay thank you!!! i think my uncle was just jelous coz he's bald XD
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Hahaha !!!
No Prob ^^ You're very welcome ^^
So is this the Final version ?
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nah final will be done in fine-liner and water colour or crayon i think, unless you think otherwise? ^-^
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Haha nop ^^
It's just that I'm really bad with coloring 
But Do it your Own way ^^ It will be so Awesome ^^ I just Can't wait
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lol you'll be the first to hear when it's done, unless its awful then i'll just hide it XD
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Thaanks ^^
Don't hide it ! It can't be awful !! Who would try to mess with that so beautiful face of him !!!
I'm sure it will be gorgeous
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You're very welcomeee ^^ 
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thank you so much for the comment!!! i really apreciate it ^-^
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