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inminmm [2023-11-27 22:08:31 +0000 UTC]
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yin-master [2021-07-09 07:04:54 +0000 UTC]
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Hyderbhon [2019-12-29 20:13:11 +0000 UTC]
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Krysnha [2019-08-26 18:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Another idea, is that you couldshow more of the academy, like other students, or diferent rutines of diferent students
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m0chen [2019-08-24 12:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, am I seeing a 8-pack abs right there?
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Hyderbhon [2019-08-23 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]
"Few static holds could give her this satisfaction without weight, but the iron cross is famously one of the most difficult in the world. Naturally, near every girl in the Academy can pull it off, but nobody for as long as Ellie."
It would be interesting to have a pic of several of the academy "students" holding, maybe one of them just collapsing, with a big timer on the wall behind them (presumably, repeating one on the opposite wall in front of them). You could show something of the range of body types, hair colors, etc., of the academy trainees.
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Sandspire In reply to Hyderbhon [2019-10-05 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Agreed - that kind of thing is definitely the sort of thing that regularly happens at the Academy. I'd like to do group pictures some time.
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beez1717 [2019-08-19 05:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Hot damn! Ellie looks so sexy here and she also impress me so much!
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DjFex [2019-08-18 02:25:26 +0000 UTC]
nice! really well drawn, also: drawn sweat ++ (I mean it looks like real sweat)
and how agonized her muscles look, you've improved so much, even from last year, the shading and muscles look more realistic, too: www.deviantart.com/abdomental/…
Ellie kinda looks older here, partially because of her height, partially because of the way she tightly shuts her eyes. I guess she is still the same age as the one where she introduces the new students to the academy though.
Nothing beats the attached stories though, as long as they take, always worth it +1
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PsyHunter29 [2019-08-18 00:54:18 +0000 UTC]
Wait... you mean Ellie's not the greatest trainee at the academy? The plot thickens!
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DjFex In reply to PsyHunter29 [2019-08-18 02:19:09 +0000 UTC]
"An image of her better self, leagues ahead of the girl who is already the top athlete of the prestigious Academy."
As in:
An image of herself - the top athlete of the prestigious Academy - but better, leagues ahead (of her current form).
she imagines her future self redefining what is to be expected from an academy student.
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PsyHunter29 In reply to DjFex [2019-08-18 12:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Ach, my mistake.
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Sandspire In reply to PsyHunter29 [2019-08-18 01:38:46 +0000 UTC]
Haha no, I suppose that's my fault - it's talking about Ellie herself.
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Sandspire In reply to verseless [2019-09-14 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that would be a hell of a feat.
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Krysnha [2019-08-18 00:11:04 +0000 UTC]
not bad
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Burksaurus [2019-08-18 00:00:54 +0000 UTC]
I really like her story showing how she's determined
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