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Published: 2012-07-27 02:07:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 6685; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 8
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The Crying DragonA powerful dragon is sad.
Sad because she is alone with
no one to love.
No one to be with.
No one to share her life with.
With no one to love her.
So she will cry until there is someone
to love her.
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I think it is a beautiful poem.Β
Hopefully the dragon will find happiness
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Thank you. ^_^
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*runs up to dragon and gives her a hug* theres no need to be sad anymore.
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I hope I'm not too late, can I cuddle with her to make her feel better?
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I will love you i dont like it when creatures are sad so i will love you forever so dont cry
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I wish to be with one
To make me feel glad
But I've been so undone
It makes me feel bad.
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Some day, little dragon, you would see Β
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Id walk up to the dragon and say "If you need a companion ill gladly keep you company."
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I'd give the dragon a huge hug and be her friend 
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you're welcomeΒ ^^
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Wow, that's impressive. When I could I would hug the beautiful dragon! No one should be without love! Β
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Aww poor girl, I'd give her a hug and make sure she was never unhappy again
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Poor girl...*hugs her* Β I'll be your friend...I can love you...if that's okay with you, miss Dragon...
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*snuggles, wiping her tears*
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Also, I's know too well how this dragon be feeling. Me experiences in the War of Acquisition be still fresh in me mind. Now, how 'bout I give ye some support.Β
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Also, might I's add, this be reminding me greatly of a shanty known as " The Final Chapter", by Adam Hoek. The song be 'bout a little boy who is in a coma and is fighting off his worst fears inside his mind after a horrible accident at Fredbear's Diner where he got a section of his brain bitten off when his older brother and a group of his friends decided to bully the child by placing his head close to the mouth of the star animatronic on the stage. They did that 'cause the brother know the child absolutely dreaded the animatronics of the diner. He ended up getting a large chunk of his brain removed because of the accident and was sent to the hospital, where he then entered a major coma. Here be a section of the song for ye:"Everything you know, everything you've seen is just a wonderland, it's just a dream. All that joy and all that laughter will stop when you see the: FINAL CHAPTER. Wake up! This is no Disney Dream! Forever after you, are hunted by machine! How 'bout you close your eyes? Will you dream sweet or will you lose your life? I know you think you won't cry. You can run from your captor, but not in this final chapter."Β
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I don't see how this is connect my poem.
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Oh, forgot to mention that the child while in his coma is completely alone and is left to fend for himself without any help or support. He be completely isolated in his coma with nothing to comfort him while his nightmares slowly close in on him. He also cries his eyes out while he be in that coma, and that be the major connection, the negative atmosphere and sense of isolation and tragedy.Β
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Except the difference be while this here dragon is alone that little child is in a coma surrounded by his worst fears as they try to corner him in his room on top of him being alone. Also, Β I'm sure ye know how that child got out of his coma. I'll let ye figure that out.Β
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At least yer character didn't have to go through that. PS: the child died when his life support systems were disconnected from him after the hospital could not exhume him from his coma.Β
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Yeah.
That's sad.
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Oh yes that much be true indeed.Β
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Wow where are ye? I really don't want to ask this, but have ye seen nightmares regarding animatronics with rows of teeth and massive claws 'cause to it be seeming like this dragon be 'bout ready to enter a nightmarish world. Also, great story by the way, even if it be short. Feel free to check out me own stories if ye want, but I warn ye, they have much content that ye probably would have to read me stories multiple times.Β
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Ye aren't a person of many words are ye?Β
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