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SchluffyMuffin — Pride in Nature
#deer #green #nature #pridemonth #pridemonth2017
Published: 2017-06-01 06:11:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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I wanted to get something done really quickly for Pride Month, especially since there's gonna be a s*** storm of sketches starting tomorrow. I know the monochrome pallet is a but hard to see, but it's a little deer with a butterfly on her nose.Related content
Comments: 6
Hello
I'd like to try and give you a constructive comment on your drawing
First of all, I like it. The lines are clear, the colours of the character are very harmonic and natural. The character itself looks allright, with a simple but good anatomy.
Now let's see some points that would take some rework. First of all the overlaying lines. They make the picture look less smooth, brakeing the nice curvey lines. for example on the side of her horns. The secound thing is the shadow/light. It's well done, but has some random lines messing it up a bit.
There are two more things I'd mention. The first is the grass, for a picture like this, it looks a bit under detailed.
The last thing that I looked off for the first glance is the green background for the green character, but I read the description and saw that it is a pride month picture. If it wasn't, you might wanna use some contrasting colours to make the character pop.
All in all, I really like it, looks great and there are only a few tiny mistakes to correct
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Thanks for your critique! I'm glad you like it, and I'll definitely try to make improvements!
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I think the little deer looks absolutely adorable. But it looks like you adding shading within the hair. I think if you made the shading just a bit darker, then this piece would be pulled together. All in all this is very adorable.
I'm from comment project group if don't know.
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It's simple and cute. I really like deer, and I like your take on it as well.
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