Comments: 124
SpiderGuile [2007-01-14 08:43:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Very nice!!
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starflower135 In reply to SpiderGuile [2007-01-14 16:17:09 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^_^ colored one coming really soon, i promise
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SilSolo [2007-01-14 03:02:18 +0000 UTC]
neat inking, not that I'd expect less
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TheKrillsta [2007-01-14 02:38:46 +0000 UTC]
it's coming along nicely! now that you've inked it the neck and arms are looking better. great job - and wow, you've collected allot of commenter's!
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starflower135 In reply to TheKrillsta [2007-01-14 16:29:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^_^ lol, no kidding...i love them all!!!!
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TheWingsofPanda [2007-01-12 01:21:56 +0000 UTC]
OH! um...well... letsee, she doesn't really look chibi...and... i don't think she's out of proportion
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clow-reed16 [2007-01-10 17:30:28 +0000 UTC]
i love it! an instant fav for both this and the coloured (when it comes out) and so here is the answer to your questions
1) no sorry not a chibi
2) and the second is the proportion is great you did a good job and i cannot find a single thing wrong so very good job!
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Ryonyanko [2007-01-10 15:49:46 +0000 UTC]
@__@ she is beautiful!
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TsunamicMoon [2007-01-09 01:58:19 +0000 UTC]
I like the wand ish so pwetty!
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starflower135 In reply to TsunamicMoon [2007-01-09 02:16:51 +0000 UTC]
thankie ^^ when it's colored, it will look even better ^_^
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ChuS2 [2007-01-09 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]
if you want for it too pass as a chibi.. well if enlarging the head is too much of a hassle the easiest way to make it 'chibi like' with minimum effort is enlarging the eyes.. but the best way to go is the head and eyes of course ^-^
i don't see anything that badly out of porportion. but there are 2 things i see. 1) the neck is quite thin.. but that may just be your style..
2) the left shoulder.. if the shoulder is positioned that way it shouldn't be possible for her arm to be at that angle.. (well i guess HER right, but my left... err the arm with the staff)
ok #2 was worded badly.. if you don't understand just tell me or ignore it ^-^;; oh and she might be able to carry that staff very well if she holds it up like that, so becarful sakura! >_< you don't want to break it~ (cause you drew it so pretty and well~ <33)
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Unborn-Sin [2007-01-08 20:34:26 +0000 UTC]
hey! uh, no this could not pass as a chibi. as for perportions, her waist and neck seem really small. Also the arm on the left looks like it's on an odd angle.
other than that, great!
p.s- i love the hair, and that little feathery clip.
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starflower135 In reply to DPcrazy565 [2007-01-08 16:48:53 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^ it will be colored and inked shortly ^^
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Saenda [2007-01-08 14:57:04 +0000 UTC]
1. I don't think so... For that, her head should be bigger, as well as her eyes. And her body should be smaller, a little chubby.
2. There is the arm... it has kind of a weird angle compare to the position of the shoulder... And the upper part of the arm is a bit too thin. The neck is also thin. And for the legs...if the dress doesn't continue after the sheet of paper, they should be longer. If they do continue after the sheet of paper, than I said nothing at all!
Now, critique mode off. xD
This is very cute^^ Great job! The hair, dress, scepter and cape are great! I love the details on them^^
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starflower135 In reply to Saenda [2007-01-08 16:56:09 +0000 UTC]
oh, ok. i'll keep that in mind. thank you very much ^^
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Ducarva [2007-01-08 13:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work!
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