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KurvyKate [2020-10-02 15:09:22 +0000 UTC]
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Writers-Dreamed In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-10-19 22:20:29 +0000 UTC]
Ah, actually it wasn't world history xD I live in the region, so that is why we were learning about him, or more specifically, about how he introduced Christianity to the people. We varely mentioned anything else about him, though, so to see it presented here was both surprising, informative and above all interesting to read 😀
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Zara-Arletis In reply to Writers-Dreamed [2016-10-21 16:57:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I saw you are Serbian. I think Rastislav is best known for that - bringing the Bible and litany to the people in their own language. Of course, with Constantine and Metod ^_^
You know, if you're not already a member, I think you would really enjoy
It's a literature and critique group dedicated to helping dA writers improve. Your stories are excellent, and your comments and critiques are insightful. We'd love to have you.
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Zara-Arletis In reply to Writers-Dreamed [2016-10-23 16:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah yeah, a bunch of my stuff can't go in group because of length. I have a hard time keeping my stories under 3K. I think some ideas just can't be fully expressed in short form.
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Writers-Dreamed In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-10-24 10:43:04 +0000 UTC]
For me, it is more that all of my ideas can't be fully expressed in short form.
Prompts are different, because for all that they are my ideas, they came from an outside source. All things that were not prompted by anything, from which there is currently one in my gallery admittedly, end up far too long for the group, 99,99 percent of the time :/
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Writers-Dreamed In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-10-26 04:48:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah I am lucky in that way that for me, prompted stories always turne out short 😀 I have never written anything longer than a 1000 and a hundred or twon maybe three, words for a prompt I think xD
As for my gallery, I am happy to hear that. There are only two morr worls there though. I have been meaning to write more of course but school sudenly got busy...
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KCKinny [2016-09-24 21:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! Kept me interested.
I too have noticed the lack of English information on Slovakia and related areas. I work with a Slovak as an editor and cross-checking some of his facts... well, I just have to take his word for it sometimes.
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Zara-Arletis In reply to KCKinny [2016-09-26 19:29:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Yeah, it really surprised me how little historical information there is on that place and period in English. I'm lucky I had some help to translate Slovak sources. I've gotten the impression they are a very private people and English speaking countries haven't gone out of their way for info. I'd love to see more Slovak literature and history translated. There are so many interesting stories out there!
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KCKinny In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-10-02 01:19:49 +0000 UTC]
Lucky you on having someone around to translate!
Yeah, Westerners in general tend to have a lack of information on other countries beyond the traditional The-Romans-Were-Here areas.
The world is made of stories. I sometimes wish I could stand in a place and see every story that passed through.
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KCKinny In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-10-07 18:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Exactly! Text-based high-five for you, madam.
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Zorbonaut [2016-09-13 20:25:04 +0000 UTC]
Interesting story! I doubt there are too many historical inaccuracies -- you leave much of the setting up to imagination.
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Zorbonaut In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-09-23 08:30:59 +0000 UTC]
I bet researching is fun, but since most people don't know jack shit about the early middle ages in eastern europe, what's more important is that it feels right. And I think you nailed that.
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LostGryphin [2016-09-13 14:26:51 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD
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Emmandin [2016-09-13 14:07:59 +0000 UTC]
Your narrative and character building got me really engaged in the story. You conveyed Karol's emotions incredibly well. Awesome work!
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Zara-Arletis In reply to Emmandin [2016-09-13 16:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wasn't sure about Karol as a protagonist at first, but he developed very nicely ^_^
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Emmandin In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-09-14 07:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, he was super relatable and likable. <3
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Zara-Arletis In reply to Celtic-Lily [2016-09-13 16:56:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! There are a lot of pretty exciting stories from the time period, nations being founded, leaders betrayed, revolutions and epic battles - if I decide to continue Karol's story I will definitely post.
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Lintu47 [2016-09-13 12:28:09 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!
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DC-26 [2016-09-13 10:39:27 +0000 UTC]
This is a great read - I think because the setting enhances the story, but isn't the point of the story. Because the reader cares about Karol and what happens to him, even if not especially interested in Moravian history. We even get to like the old kral - rather as Karol does. Great characters you've created.
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Zara-Arletis In reply to DC-26 [2016-09-13 16:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I think stories should be about characters, no matter how important or exciting the events around them. This was my first attempt at historical fiction, so I really tried to bring that across. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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DC-26 In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-09-15 11:39:26 +0000 UTC]
The work you put in is evident!
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MercenaryBlade [2016-08-18 12:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Great story about a naïve boy caught up in political intrigue. I'm glad you did your research it paid off, this was a wonderful read
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Zara-Arletis In reply to MercenaryBlade [2016-08-18 14:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^_^ I really wasn't sure initially what kind of story it would be for Karol but I like how it turned out.
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BATTLEFAIRIES [2016-08-17 19:50:47 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so we've got your bear to thank in part for making this feel so alive, then!
It's a gem of a thing and I'm going to recommend it, if you don't mind. Best of luck with the contest!
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BATTLEFAIRIES In reply to Zara-Arletis [2016-08-18 11:22:21 +0000 UTC]
I think the fact that it's not an everyday timeframe or region makes it all the more valuable. Extra credit!
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