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ChillySunDance — The Guardian - part 1

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    The battle raged on, carried to the grassy outskirts of Andalusst by the quick thinking of the Explorers and their plan to lead the action away from the city. No more buildings would be destroyed, but the imminent threat of the seemingly crazed statue was upon the three guilds who opposed it. Even though it was a violent fight, it was visually a sight to behold. Colorful psychokinetic waves crashed against the large creature’s body, joined by high-pressured jets of water, powerful blasts of fire, and crackling zaps of electricity. Quick Pokemon darted in and out of the enemy’s reach, while the most powerful stood steadfast against its blows. Though the statue’s relative health after taking so much abuse appeared unfazed, each guild’s leadership pressed the attack. The plan was about to be set in motion.


    With the final required act of cleverness by one of the many teams present, the last of the Researchers’ signal boosters was fastened onto the colossal attacker’s body. As soon as Chelle observed this, she turned from the battle and quickly hovered her way across the grassy plain. When she was within earshot of the cloth-swaddled Sandshrew who was operating their hastily-built equipment, she gave the order, “Activate it now!”


    A loud, ominous crackling noise emanated from the Researchers’ alchemic jamming device as soon as it was activated, and it only became louder. Like an intense, building storm, it escalated up to a near deafening volume as it reached full power, and the same crackle was mimicked by the marauding statue as the boosters that had been fastened to it resonated with the device, ready to channel its power into the unwary foe as it defended itself from the many Pokemon around it.


    The Sandshrew couldn’t help but flash a brief grin of pride at his work just before he slammed his claw down upon the biggest, reddest button on the jammer’s interface. A thunderous wave blasted out from the statue in that instant, flooring some who had taken stance around it. Most importantly, it forced the statue to freeze, unmoving. The glow in its so-called eyes persisted to a degree, but it no longer fought back. The jammer had accomplished even more than the advertised easing of the battle; it had won it. Weary Pokemon all around the creature picked themselves up from the grass and collectively felt a wave of cautious relief. The fight was over.


    …


    “It still wants to fight us.”


    Chelle’s statement struck the seriousness of the situation back into everyone around her, cutting their celebrations short. She stared into the colorful lights on the front of the statue, having never been able to approach it while it was rampaging. A few of them had turned off due to the jammer’s influence, but others remained on, which gave off a bit of a pathetic, half-dead appearance. In those lights she may as well refer to as eyes, she felt no malice, only mechanism. Nothing about its actions or its body language suggested that it hated them, nor that it was striking out with feral rage of some sort. If it were to re-activate, it would surely attempt to attack them once more, but why?


    The whole situation left Chelle momentarily at a loss, which was a feeling she despised. Her mind would always obsess to wrap around something she didn’t understand, or a situation she couldn’t solve immediately. This was different, though. They could simply determine a way to dismantle the statue if it were irrevocably hostile… but what if her feelings about it were correct? Maybe… maybe there was a way.


    Chelle hovered far above the other Pokemon with her partner, Solstice. The Swoobat had been silent just as Chelle mostly had. They were both in studious silence, looking over the statue and coming to their conclusions on what to do next. However, Chelle would be the one to break the silence between them, “We should attempt to bring it back around and communicate with it. We may never have another chance like this.”


    Understandably, the suggestion was met by a strange look from the Swoobat flapping next to Chelle. “It’s risky to do that, you know. It may not even have a way of communicating with us… and what if something unforeseen happens?” she asked skeptically. It was odd for her to be on the cautious and calculating side of things, since that was usually Chelle’s role between them.


    It was correct, though. Attempting to utilize psychic abilities on any creature was no joke, and this one was perhaps the most serious attempt she’d make in her life. Still, the other danger was that the statue would reactivate on its own when they weren’t ready for it, and it may hurt someone before they could manage to re-activate the jammer and subdue it again. Something had to be done.


    Chelle bowed her head momentarily, steeling herself for the choice she was about to make. Her gel-based arms outstretched forward, and from them channeled her psychic power which traveled through the air like mild ocean waves. Tender, unlike the attacks she visited upon it in battle.


    “Chelle, are you crazy? What do you think you’re doing?!” Sol whispered to her nervously.


    “Something you should aid me with. Please do not break my concentration,” Chelle replied. Her focus was on the statue, and it had to stay that way. She wasn’t sure whether her companion would see things her way, until she noticed a similar wave float out from Sol’s direction. It was less intense, less powerful than her own, but it was generally accepted between the two that Chelle’s gift of psychic power was simply greater. Still, she would need all the help she could get.


    Every pulsing wave found its way through the outside of the statue and into its heart, or more specifically, its core, which had been rendered mostly non-functional by the jammer. Chelle and Sol gave it their all to try and spark life back into the statue, but to no avail. At most, their efforts seemed to scramble the few lights still present in the colossal creature’s eyes. Still, they continued on. Something had to give.

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Comments: 58

GamingTepig [2014-09-12 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

i know whos pokemon the swompert and buzel are they belong to azure pheonix she iss great at drawing like you great picture

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ChillySunDance In reply to GamingTepig [2014-09-13 05:15:27 +0000 UTC]

actually those are my characters. they're official PMDU npc's, Luke and Cassidy. They've been around since the group started! (and in cassidy's case, he took part in PMD-E too)

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GamingTepig In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-09-13 09:32:05 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry azure phonix showed them me and i though they were hers sorry 

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Kookiris [2014-07-01 09:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Theses colors *o*

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shadacate [2014-06-26 04:02:43 +0000 UTC]

awesome!  

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Albino-Noivern-Eli [2014-05-17 22:07:35 +0000 UTC]

I love that crazy looking sneasel next to the regi's hand. :>

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sylph-feather [2014-03-29 23:02:25 +0000 UTC]

What art program did you use?

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ChillySunDance In reply to sylph-feather [2014-03-30 08:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Paint tool Sai

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sylph-feather In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-03-30 13:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you.

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sylph-feather [2014-03-29 13:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Is it to late to join?

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ChillySunDance In reply to sylph-feather [2014-03-30 08:42:59 +0000 UTC]

This group is always open.

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sylph-feather In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-03-30 13:46:44 +0000 UTC]

No, I mean M1.

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Grassdino [2014-03-14 19:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow! THis is so cool! owo I wish I was this good of a drawer

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hunterN05 [2014-03-14 08:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow! this is astounding! I love it!

(Herp derp I ended up deleting everything in my inbox pertaining to Unity XP)

This looks awesome~! so many cameos~ hmmm... I wonder.. *scans it* nope, they're not there ;.;

Awesome work man! I lurv it!

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WishfulVixen [2014-02-26 23:42:43 +0000 UTC]

OH wowee im so dumb I totally forgot to comment on this! 
Anyway-- Thank you so much for adding Astra into there aaa I'm very glad I managed to stand out! It makes all the work I put into the comic feel super worthwhile!  I've read the whole first part and I must say I really like how the writing part is going and the artwork is exceptional cause omg colours wow, I wish I dared to use such bright colours ohoho

Anyway! Thanks again for the cameo! I'll do my best to hold up to the standard!

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Lyran-Wolf [2014-02-26 06:35:42 +0000 UTC]

The colors are very beautiful and work well together! I really enjoy all the characters I see in the picture! I even recognize a few in there from some of the submissions I've read as well Awesome job Chilly x3 and thank you for the cameo on Team Lost And Found. It was a really pleasant surprise to see them in there, again thank you Looking forward to how you progress with this group along with all your helpers/friends as well. Good luck Chilly!

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frandllle [2014-02-16 02:05:18 +0000 UTC]

OMGOMG THIS LOOKS BEAUTIFUL AND I SEE TEAM TYPHOON IN THERE!!
Thank you so much for including Team Typhoon into the epilogue, I was literally jumping up and down in my chair when I spotted Tabbs and Vincent~! ;;____;;
I even spotted some of my favorite teams from Mission 1 in the background as well, which made me even happier that I wasn't the only one who enjoyed their parts in the story~~ 

I'm excited for mission 2, and seeing Tabbs and Vincent in the background make me want to do better for the next mission ;;;w;;;



 

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Somas-Illis [2014-02-14 00:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Nonetheless, This is really something else! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Somas-Illis [2014-02-14 00:00:35 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling I may have strayed a bit too far with my story...

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DanaDelphox In reply to Somas-Illis [2014-02-23 23:37:10 +0000 UTC]

oh trust me i'm pretty sure you're not the only one, my self included.

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byona [2014-02-11 15:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Sundance the colours are so harmonious and eye-candy here, being able to look at the picture in full view in all its glory is really refreshing! I think all the cameos are a good idea, I feel like the members really do have a part in the events now, it's not just the leaders the focus is on, it's the community as a whole! And I think that's the right way things should be handled.

I see a lot of my favourite teams among cameos, too!


Oh and naturally, thank you for cameo'ing Johnny and Oliver. I have thanked you before, but I feel it's right to say it here in public as well, haha! Gonna keep trying my best for the group c; 

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DrBackMan [2014-02-11 04:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I've been waiting to favorite this since I saw it on Tumblr. Thank you very much for considering my team worthy of been here. That only motivates me to make a much better entry on the next mission.

I recognize most of the teams here but there are a couple I've never seen. I should look them up.

(I love the colors on this one, easily my favorite piece on the group so far)

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Sepia-Zorua [2014-02-10 14:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for including Team Faulty into this picture. It's amazing really. I never thought Team Faulty would got noticed but that was faulty on my part. (hehe)

 

I really love these illustrations! You show amazing skill with lighting. The perspective here is great. Your artwork is so colourful and full of energy. I can recognize a lot of these teams, when pictures like these are done it feels more like a close community.

 

(I'm also impressed with your ability to draw tiny)

 

 

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ChillySunDance In reply to Sepia-Zorua [2014-02-11 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Your submission was easily one of my personal favorites, so well done on that!
As for the perspective, I still think it's a bit off, but this is pretty much all on one layer now so further changes would be a nightmare.

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Sepia-Zorua In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-11 12:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Perspective is one of the hardest things to master but i'm sure that you'll be able to master it. I still think you did a good job here though.

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Mavrick4d [2014-02-10 03:49:43 +0000 UTC]

This is like an ingame artwork from PMD. Nahh, it's better. 


Beautiful, absolutely stunning.

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ArtOfTheGame [2014-02-10 01:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Man, it's crazy how fantastic and colorful your art is. So many awesome cameos from the community too! What an explosive end to the mission!

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UltimateSassMaster [2014-02-09 23:19:43 +0000 UTC]

I see Eon managed to slap one of the jammers on Regi's crotch after all heheh

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Azurynn [2014-02-09 12:30:46 +0000 UTC]

The artwork looks absolutely amazing - all of the colours go so nicely together.

 

Looking forward to seeing what happens next, it was a good read

 

(The epilogue is here and I haven't even uploaded the first page of my comic yet... shame on me. xD)

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DreamingWhileMad [2014-02-08 18:48:02 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing. I like how it shows the atmosphere of tension among the group as Chelle and Sol examine the statue. 

n hindsight I shouldn't have included the statue being frozen (while at the time I figured it was the only way to show the improvement to Flint's design in action). Should I make an adjustment to it so that it coincides with this ending?

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ChillySunDance In reply to DreamingWhileMad [2014-02-09 10:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Nah it's fine, you can just assume the ice melted or flaked off or something.

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DreamingWhileMad In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-09 17:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, by "frozen" I meant the statue being turned back to stone, not frozen in ice (sorry if that wasn't clear in my writing ). I ended up just deleting that one paragraph anyway; it seemed kind of cliché, looking at it again. I still left the machine stopping the statue from moving though.

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DreamingWhileMad In reply to DreamingWhileMad [2014-02-08 18:48:17 +0000 UTC]

*In hindsight

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SapphireMiuJewel [2014-02-08 11:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!~ Awesome!!~ >w<

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diamagon [2014-02-08 09:34:30 +0000 UTC]

I love the art, but... no so much the text.

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ChillySunDance In reply to diamagon [2014-02-09 06:51:36 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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diamagon In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-09 20:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Its kinda hard to read. first it seems that were looking at the story in "gods eyes" as in, being able to see everything, but then it changes to chells perspective, and then its kinda fuzzy about who's perspective it was.


sometimes word choice implys a present tense even thou the rest of it is in past tense. and some sentences seem to have a "band-aid" finish that goes with a comma, after it.    <--- kinda like that. I feel thats because the sentence is too vague and whats after the comma does is try to fix it. 


and the use of "it" & other vague words make it difficult to understand what or who its about.


but this is only my opinion, other people seem to like it so it might just be me jajaja  XD


btw the transparency stuff you do is oh god... its so good!

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ChillySunDance In reply to diamagon [2014-02-10 06:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Good critique, I will pass it on to Luvaci.

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AALYC [2014-02-08 02:10:23 +0000 UTC]

question for a quicky...how do you choose cameos?
other then that i <3 this!

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ChillySunDance In reply to AALYC [2014-02-08 06:29:58 +0000 UTC]

I scanned through all the submissions personally and chose characters I either really liked, or characters from exceptional submissions. I did want to include more, but ran out of energy.

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AALYC In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-08 14:06:21 +0000 UTC]

oh ok. How can we tell is a submission is exceptional?

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ChillySunDance In reply to AALYC [2014-02-09 10:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Due to it being exceptional.
There really isn't a better answer than that, sorry. A high quality submission that stands out from the others and has a lot of work and effort put into, or maybe one that has a lot of charm and character or a really unique art style/ team gimmick is easily spotted.

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AALYC In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-09 14:25:19 +0000 UTC]

ok...so would you let people know when they have done exceptional work via writing/art?
just wanna know so i can improve ^^
Also, sorry about the many questions

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ChillySunDance In reply to AALYC [2014-02-09 14:29:52 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't work like that. I picked cameos based on submissions that really stood out and really captured the group spirit. It's not something you can try to force. If you want to improve, then just focus on getting better.

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AALYC In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-11 19:48:09 +0000 UTC]

i know that. I just mean like a grade or something...ya know, criticism on points so we COULD get better

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Rising-Sea [2014-02-07 23:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Can I just say how AWESOME OF AWESOMENESS THIS PIUCTURE + STORY BRINGS ME!!! I'VE READ IT FIVE TIMES OVER AND AM NOT BORED WITH IT!!!

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Deeborm [2014-02-07 14:01:28 +0000 UTC]

"what if something unforeseen happens?" Yes well you can say that about literally any situation so shut up and get to helping okay Solstice geez

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TimeturnerJasmy [2014-02-07 12:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Both the story and the drawing are great! I especially love the light and all the cameos in the picture. If you excuse me now, I have to keep staring at it and admire all the beautiful details!

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LalaLay-A [2014-02-07 12:16:58 +0000 UTC]

I can see a few of my favorite teams there. Astra the Fennekin for one;

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Ludjia [2014-02-07 09:32:29 +0000 UTC]

That is some intense quality artwork there.

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