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Indra1408 — The Rose's Thorns Will Never Harm Us

Published: 2018-01-13 22:42:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Description This could have come out better in so many ways, but I do feel it was a better go than the last time around. This is a commission for burningpapertigers I'm going to touch up the line work a tad and then it will be ready to ship
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DoubleDandE [2018-03-09 15:28:37 +0000 UTC]

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That’s a very nicely drawn illustration there. I really like the use of lines in this one, not only on the character alone, but the background as well. I like how the purples and blues are used more where it’s supposed to be water, while the rest are orange and res on dry land. The lantern there suggests lighting, and this has a very nice color to it. I especially like how the fish has a slight shimmer to it, there’s enough white poking through that helps add that it’s slippery- and the detail on the wings are great alone. Miniscule they are, they’re overall good.


The feline looking character looks interesting though. They’re holding a bow with the bird. While the bird looks static, it’s very hard to capture motion, but a useful tip would be to portray the wings when they’re in motion, or are flapping to one position or back. The cat character looks a bit stiff though, but that could be due to them relaxing on the rock there.


One big advice I would suggest would be to lay the picture in a good light source (maybe have flash lights around) and ensure that the picture is well lit and then take a snap. While it doesn’t have to be high quality, I think cropping it and adjusting it in Photoshop (or a free art program) would help us see the details and the shading you put into a lot easier for us to see. And it’ll look a bit more professional than holding it out with your hand. Maybe even capture part of the table, and have your drawing tools places around it like some people on DA do.


Overall you’ve done a great job on this. I rather like the shading used here. The roses are not just one solid color here; they’re rather a variety of shades like you’d see in a rose garden. The petals falling from the tree look nice, and although it doesn’t seem like it, I take it they’re above the feline, falling on top of him. This must make this a rather big cat, or a small rose bush- some shading here for shadows would also help (like using some purples or blues).  The watery effect looks amazing if that’s supposed to be water, and I like the texture you gave the feline creature for the fur. It’s almost like the fur on a real cat. 



Keep up the amazing work.  

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Indra1408 In reply to DoubleDandE [2018-03-09 23:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the detailed feedback I much appreciate it

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DoubleDandE In reply to Indra1408 [2018-03-10 07:09:00 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome. 

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Maria-Schreuders [2018-02-14 04:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic work, good drawing

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Indra1408 In reply to Maria-Schreuders [2018-02-14 20:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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Maria-Schreuders In reply to Indra1408 [2018-02-15 05:11:10 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome   

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TeamStormbow [2018-02-09 16:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Is this Chakra BoT? CY looks awesome!

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Indra1408 In reply to TeamStormbow [2018-02-09 21:52:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure you'd have to ask the owner of the Oc burningpapertigers   she commissioned me for it, check her out sometime her works are really cute

Aw thanks I'm glad you like it

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ProtoTEnterprise [2018-02-01 13:20:44 +0000 UTC]

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When this image appears, it means that it is excellent.

And how can it not be? Compositively, it is very well accomplished. It explodes in details and designs. You have a great handling with the pencils and it is especially noticeable the background that this plagiarism of it.

The same can be said of the lion with gray or wolf fur that has a phenomenal design, anatomically is fine, gives a tight contrast that balances the drawing and without doubts, if you look at the background, you will see a blue bird that helps to balance more to the drawing

It is an excellent job and without doubts, it will be better when it is scanned

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Indra1408 In reply to ProtoTEnterprise [2018-02-02 04:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks so much; your amazingly kind words mean so much

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Cake-a-Tron [2018-01-31 04:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Ooh wow this is very nice! I love all those gorgeous colours in the rock, and the creature looks really beautiful. Great work!

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Indra1408 In reply to Cake-a-Tron [2018-02-02 04:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks I'm glad you like it Cute Icon btw

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Cake-a-Tron In reply to Indra1408 [2018-02-02 04:41:29 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Aw thank you X3

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Indra1408 In reply to Cake-a-Tron [2018-02-02 04:44:19 +0000 UTC]

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adam-ant2 [2018-01-31 01:32:09 +0000 UTC]

The design for the cat is brilliant. I could complain about the drawing being drab but that's probably because of the photo quality.

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Indra1408 In reply to adam-ant2 [2018-02-02 04:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks glad you like it

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caddman [2018-01-17 04:26:25 +0000 UTC]

...well done ...

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Indra1408 In reply to caddman [2018-01-17 19:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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caddman In reply to Indra1408 [2018-01-17 23:48:01 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure ALWAYS dear friend!!!!😊 🙆 💓

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im-waterproof [2018-01-14 03:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is beautiful. So detailed and dreamy. I love the colors.

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Indra1408 In reply to im-waterproof [2018-01-14 10:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DeerNectarII [2018-01-13 23:04:14 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to put this on my wall! <3 I really like the pose and the angle on Cy's face, your coloring is fantastic as usual. There's a great variety of warm and cool colors. Your backgrounds are so dream-like. The interaction between the two characters is perfect, the red ribbon/string reminds me of the story of Rahab as it is a symbol of redemption in my head-world. Thank you so much, I adore it

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Indra1408 In reply to DeerNectarII [2018-01-13 23:21:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you're happy with the piece. Really thank you so much for all your kind words and for commissioning me it means a lot. Your world Rehab is there other critters like Cy there sounds like it would be a fun comic or something like that....

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