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KurvyKate In reply to AsapTenebrae [2020-05-08 11:43:50 +0000 UTC]
Yes it does. Did you have to go back and read parts again because you were confused? Did that spoil the flow of the story for you?
The trouble with reading your own writing is it's hard to see mistakes because you read what you know it's supposed to say and not what it actually does!
Other people tell it like it is, please.
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LairdTam [2020-05-04 18:52:13 +0000 UTC]
It certainly makes sense to me, sexy Kate. I will work my way through these instalments. I must say that the flame of your unique and astonishing erotic imagination burns brightly here. What a brilliant writer and a remarkable woman you truly are, playmate!
Tam xxx
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KurvyKate In reply to LairdTam [2020-05-05 07:11:22 +0000 UTC]
It's OK, you can soak me in praise Tam, I can cope!
Kate XXX
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