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LifesWaitingToBegin — A good Critique.

Published: 2007-04-04 16:43:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 4620; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 77
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Description Is this any help to you guys out there who cant critique?

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Shimizuggi [2010-06-18 17:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! This made me understand what is good critigue. I gonna try some time. (When I get chance XD)


(And yeah maybe I said something wrong bad english you know..)

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WhiteKimahri [2010-03-19 07:13:15 +0000 UTC]

A good work!!
Straight in my favourites.

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UnUnPentium115 [2008-11-24 23:09:48 +0000 UTC]

You really should publish towards a greater audience. It is totally what dA has needed.

btw: omg, so cute! Such a beautiful text !!!!1111 <3

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to UnUnPentium115 [2008-11-25 16:00:33 +0000 UTC]

thanx, and what do you mean a greater audience?
x

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UnUnPentium115 In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2008-11-25 17:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Make it public to many more people! You put a lot of effort in that piece, but you just have 1100 views. Try to draw more attention to it! I totally support the content, so I would be pleased if more people read it and probably think twice before commenting "cute!!!"

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celestian-boy [2008-05-05 13:35:19 +0000 UTC]

You've earned my respect,
this guide's what we really need here on DeviantART, provided that I've seen specially talented artists who actually can't make a constructive critique.
Still, I'd have prefered seeing this written in a better font, on a better background so it's more likely to attract someone to read it and eventually use it...
Nevertheless, I verily like the way you've explained the method to write a constructive comment : good language, easy tone and the use of an illustrated exemple...
Again, I'll say that you've earned my respect

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to celestian-boy [2008-05-06 13:44:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much =]

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celestian-boy In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2008-05-06 17:50:16 +0000 UTC]

I shall say thank you

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FeraFilius [2008-01-27 06:10:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!1! thats sooo good

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AlexaSharlOt [2008-01-22 13:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Super I will show it to my friends.

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eskimoblueboy [2007-11-23 12:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Very helpful. Thank you.

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rowenabrennavart [2007-11-16 23:30:47 +0000 UTC]

You've been featured here [link]

Tell me if that's ok with you, if not I'll remove it right away ^-^ Thank you for doing this deviation!

Help to spread the word if you can! n_n Love,

Cris

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to rowenabrennavart [2007-11-17 10:31:46 +0000 UTC]

oh wow thanx for the feature

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rowenabrennavart In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2007-11-17 13:15:29 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome n_n

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Rock-Art-Madrid [2007-08-26 02:28:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG! wowww this is so cool!

Just kidding, I added it to my favorites hoping more people gets to see it. I admit most times I write simple useless comments on an image if it already has too many comments, I tend to think like "yeah yeah you know you did a great job so I'll just say it's cool", but at least I always try to leave good and usefull critique on photography, and tips regarding composition or colors etc and I've noticed how the artist's appreciate it

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to Rock-Art-Madrid [2007-08-26 02:30:51 +0000 UTC]

haha "OMG! wowww this is so cool! " <--made me laugh =]

yeh! true, they do appreciate it more!, i must admit sometimes i dont do a full critique i sometimes put what i like about it, something short and sweet enough to appreciate.

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UnUnPentium115 [2007-06-18 19:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Very good job. That's exactly what I missed at my pictures

for this good work

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Giezzy [2007-05-22 05:24:09 +0000 UTC]

Excelent guide, when I get a good critique in my works I feel so good, even when they aren't positive; I feel sad because is what really misses in DA, People always says "Kwl" "I Like" or stuff like that, and (personally) sometimes those works are really bad; and when they are good, they don't give a feedback to the owner. That's why when someone tells me what did he really liked and what didn't I get really happy.
Cool I will make a link to this later on in my Journal

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to Giezzy [2007-05-22 20:04:13 +0000 UTC]

i know its annoying its not that hard to type like 1 + 2 sentances

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dont-eat-thecactus [2007-05-06 20:02:51 +0000 UTC]

woooow. good job!

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sutoll [2007-05-02 20:46:05 +0000 UTC]

A useful tutorial at last. I think this is a very useful piece of infromation. Now I'm going to critique it . Ireally like the idea behind it,and if people read it, it will benefit them greatly. I think however that it looks quite dull and uninviting to read. I suggest that you use a less harsh type font, as the font you've used (I guess Times Roman) seems a bit spiky and like the sort of thing you'd find in an office from a typewriter. I suggest you use Ariel or Courier Sans which are more rounded and friendlier on the eyes. I also think that it looks a bit odd with all the green ssquiggly lines under some of the words (presumably from grammar). I think it is very distracting. The actual piece though is very interesting and with a bit of cosmetic changes should be a DD.

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to sutoll [2007-05-02 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the crit, the font i used was courier new i think, and i didnt realize about the squggly lines lol thanx for pointing that out

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sutoll In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2007-05-02 20:57:43 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome. I've been on a mission to improve my critiquing. This has really helped!

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to sutoll [2007-05-02 20:59:12 +0000 UTC]

glad it helped

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EverydaySoul [2007-04-19 13:55:55 +0000 UTC]

You skipped one crucial point - as you critique a photo you want to be thinking about what the artist intended to do. See the general effect they were trying for, and THEN critique. Otherwise you'll find yourself wasting time. I favorited a macro shot of a bluish pinecone with needles radiating outwards and towards the photographer. The focus softened at the edges as the pine needles drew towards the camera, which drew the eye naturally (with both selective focus and leading lines) to the pine cone - the intended subject - and I complimented her on the depth of field effect she created. The poster above her complained that focus was off, where it was quite sharp on the pinecone and softened at the edges.

For the most part, this guide offers good points! Hopefully it'll be a step towards educating the masses.

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to EverydaySoul [2007-04-19 14:47:43 +0000 UTC]

ahh yes! i read it so many times and i new i had forgot something i just couldnt work out what it was!
thanx

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EverydaySoul In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2007-04-20 20:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing!

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TerraRhapsody [2007-04-07 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

he he! amen to this! i did one of these for commenting poetry and prose people do seem to be rather clueless. the one comment i despise on a pic of mine is 'wow. crazy.'
that's all it was!
i hope some more people read this!!
good job on it, some useful info

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to TerraRhapsody [2007-04-07 15:31:12 +0000 UTC]

thankies glad you like it

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TerraRhapsody In reply to LifesWaitingToBegin [2007-04-07 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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krysolet [2007-04-06 12:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey would you like to comment some of my works ?

Excellent guide!

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Fizzical [2007-04-04 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]

This is a good guide, I used to use this method on a different website actually, sorry if i dont critque you properly. =\, Well i shall critque this!! ^^

I like the idea, one has been needed for a long time, And it teaches well, There is a Spelling mistake in there tho ^^, but not too much to worry about.

Overall good job! ^^ Its neatly presented.

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LifesWaitingToBegin In reply to Fizzical [2007-04-04 20:33:47 +0000 UTC]

thanx and sorry about the spelling misktake, i cant spell that well lol

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