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reiko-akire ā Commission: I Got Your Back
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Well this piece is surprisingly flashy and good to the eyes because of the BG's effect. Well Honestly the camera glare effect is a good choice but too much glares is a no.
Their positions are not bad, and seemingly hard for others so well done. But some points are needed to be considered. Eren's right hand specifically on the elbow, the anatomy and angle is not proportioned. And compared to their proper build, Eren should have smaller build (That's my personal taste e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Your coloring style is great but it lacks more specific details to give that "impact". Ex. Scratches, rusts effects etc. And one last thing did you purposely made Eren's blade compartment small? Well considering the angle, it should be not that small, actually it bothers me since how will They fight the titan's with small blade man? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Hey! Thanks! I really appreciate long comments and critiques like this. Thanks for pointing out all the flaws. Will surely keep those in mind the next time I draw.
Anyway, yes, you're right about the scratches or rusts effects. I rarely use textures and I'm extremely lazy to do those manually. Haha. I also get impatient real fast on drawing details.
About Eren's blade compartment. I actually laughed. I didn't notice until you've mentioned it. Haha! You're absolutely right about the size. It was a big mistake and I'm sorry for that. I'll fix it next time. xD
But then again, thanks for sparing your time on leaving a meaningful comment on my work. Merry Christmas!
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No prob
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nice I love the clouds and the bright light!
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