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Supach — Mid-summer Moon (poem)

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Published: 2015-08-27 14:52:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2339; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
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On a beautiful night with a big full moon,
in the mid-summer warm month of June.
The village had settled but no one could sleep,
 although they'd  all tried counting sheep.
Some tossed and turned and some read books,
some just listened to the babbling brook.
The moon lit up the sky so bright.
Nobody´s going to sleep tonight.
Even the birds were wide awake,
"Oh please be quiet for goodness sake!"
They preened their feathers and flew around
with tweets and hoots and a dawn chorus of sound.
It was just no use, the moon's too strong,
pulling people up from where they belong.
So robbed of sleep, the night like day
they pottered about, all yawning away.
As the moon moved on behind the hills,
now everywhere dark and wonderfully still.
Lights went out and everyone said
" Thank goodness, now we can go to bed."



written by Suzanne karbach
26.08.2015



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Comments: 36

WhIppIng-b0y [2016-02-13 07:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like my life XD Very nicely written

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Supach In reply to WhIppIng-b0y [2016-02-13 09:44:24 +0000 UTC]

^ LOL Thank you

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WhIppIng-b0y In reply to Supach [2016-02-13 10:56:08 +0000 UTC]

No prob at all! X3

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JC-Solis01 [2015-09-12 05:41:01 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love the nursery rhyme feel that this poem has!
Reminds me of all the Mother Goose poems I read when little.

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Supach In reply to JC-Solis01 [2015-09-12 08:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for this lovely comment and the

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JC-Solis01 In reply to Supach [2015-09-12 20:03:31 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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shep4life [2015-09-06 19:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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Supach In reply to shep4life [2015-09-06 20:41:39 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks.

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shep4life In reply to Supach [2015-09-10 19:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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shelleypalmer [2015-08-31 22:02:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see one of the collabs again.  That picture - I just love it, it has an amazing feeling and the poem has a lovely childlike quality and innocence.  Altogether very special.

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2015-08-31 22:47:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you.  Yes Alina inspires me every time with her  wonderful art

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lemgras330 [2015-08-28 22:00:47 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely pairing!

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Supach In reply to lemgras330 [2015-08-28 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes Alina inspires me  every time

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lemgras330 In reply to Supach [2015-08-29 11:39:32 +0000 UTC]

You make a good duo!

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NobelPoet [2015-08-28 15:20:38 +0000 UTC]

I can not favorite this enough.  

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Supach In reply to NobelPoet [2015-08-28 15:29:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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Alina-Kurbiel [2015-08-28 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this beautiful poem. It makes this picture alive.

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Supach In reply to Alina-Kurbiel [2015-08-28 15:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Alina for this beautiful painting You are a wonderful Inspiration to me

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Camille-d-Amour [2015-08-28 13:29:13 +0000 UTC]

this is so cuteeeeeeeee ^_^

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Supach In reply to Camille-d-Amour [2015-08-28 15:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Camille

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Camille-d-Amour In reply to Supach [2015-08-28 15:42:38 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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rongiveans [2015-08-28 01:32:02 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant my dear.  So exquisitely done.  

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Supach In reply to rongiveans [2015-08-28 04:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Ron

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rongiveans In reply to Supach [2015-08-28 07:41:05 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure my dear.  

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Breathing-Rams [2015-08-27 21:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry always seems to inspire me. Another beautiful piece. <3

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Supach In reply to Breathing-Rams [2015-08-27 22:04:34 +0000 UTC]

This makes me happy thank you my friend

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Klyntje [2015-08-27 16:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Nicely descriptive.

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Supach In reply to Klyntje [2015-08-27 17:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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jennystokes [2015-08-27 15:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Very well done and written........like the Old Time feeling.

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Supach In reply to jennystokes [2015-08-27 15:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Jenny    

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jennystokes In reply to Supach [2015-08-27 16:16:39 +0000 UTC]

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seek-and-hide [2015-08-27 15:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful... These rhymes make the text flow like a lullaby ...

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Supach In reply to seek-and-hide [2015-08-27 15:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mayumi glad you enjoyed it

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seek-and-hide In reply to Supach [2015-08-27 16:53:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! 

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IRIS-KUPP [2015-08-27 15:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Magical, great to read to children at night.  

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Supach In reply to IRIS-KUPP [2015-08-27 15:17:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you Iris. So pleased you think so

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