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teejaystumbles — Aquarius the 2nd

Published: 2010-02-19 16:54:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 951; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description I finally finished this... sort of.
This is a piece connected to this picture: [link]
I want to do a written story about those two someday, like a fairytale, with illustrations... Oh I remember that I started this while in Japan... *sigh* natsukashii...

I would appreciate any tips and critique what I could do better about this.
But let be said, that I DON'T do realism but manga art.
So don't tell me "You could have drawn the fishes scales better" or things like that. Tell me about colors, proportions, composition, content etc.
Thanks.
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Comments: 6

saniika [2010-02-20 20:43:59 +0000 UTC]

I like the fishes the most, but I guess I wont tell you any critique, I have the feeling you wouldn't be pleased, thus I rather leave it be. C:

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teejaystumbles In reply to saniika [2010-03-10 18:44:42 +0000 UTC]

what does that mean? that there really is something really wrong? >.<° Oh NOES!

Just joking. I mean, I know I don't really handle critique well, but you know, I wanted to become better at handling it, and improve, so don't hold back if there is anything you want to criticize

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BlueFlamedPhoenix [2010-02-19 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]

I really like the composition and colors of this but maybe you should try putting in a larger range of dark/light colors since the people look kind of flat against the BG

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teejaystumbles In reply to BlueFlamedPhoenix [2010-03-10 18:41:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you, that's something to consider

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black-arkan [2010-02-19 20:25:11 +0000 UTC]

realy like colours )))

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SilkyPorridge [2010-02-19 16:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow...really love the atmosphere. Love the irrealistic color of the skin and the lightning very impressive

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