Comments: 8
AntonioGuacciDraws [2018-02-19 19:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Hi,
I like your colors and some of your choices for the composition.
I really have not big critiques to give: I principally see approximations and uncertainties, and some lack in fundamentals of the art of drawing, but I think they're mainly caused by inexperience.
...So, my very one suggestion to you is: draw, draw, draw every time and everywhere you can! Always try to translate in pictures what you have mind! If you don't like what you've drawn, try again! And if you are satisfied with the result, try again the same: surely you'll find a better way to transform your thoughts in a your own creation!
A lot of exercise and a bit of study will be your best friends!
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IronOnion32 [2017-12-21 23:01:01 +0000 UTC]
This a good piece however I'm going to give some critiques.
I really like the colouring, especially in the background, and the folds in the man's clothing.
The mask looks good too however I would suggest having the nose partially covered by it so the mask could look like it's staying in place as well as showing the strings.
His elbows look out of proportion with eachother since his left look longer than the right; elbows are roughly at the mid-section of the torso.
The girl's head I feel would be better in a profile position or even have her body turned a bit to match where she's looking at.
Overall just a few issues but you have done good work on it and I hope that this could help even in the future.
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VampiresaQueen In reply to Elly3981 [2017-12-08 08:04:06 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome~!!! 💖💖💖
Hope it sets the mood for the upcoming... surprises in store for them! XD
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VampiresaQueen In reply to Elly3981 [2017-12-08 12:07:33 +0000 UTC]
...I just hope I didn't screw up on the mask 😱
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