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cursed-sight — Ch4Pg11 - The Gold Rider
Published: 2009-07-20 00:04:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2606; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 8
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Yes, I know K'mlar looks like a small child in the last panel. It's not my fault! My perspective sucks! Anyway, enjoy!All comments welcome. Shonen-ai warning.
Dragonriders of Pern is copyrighted by Anne & Todd McCaffrey
The characters and situations are my own
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lol. Him looking like a child is actually a good thing. "And a child shall lead them"
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I think its perfect that you hid J'lantir's eyes as he talked about caring for his weyrlings. It makes me think he's hiding something, like his true feelings.
Come on, K'mlar. Time to step up and be a man, be a Gold Rider!
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Why does this page make me sad. O.o
You getting better with your drawing!
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It should! It is sad! I'm just glad it worked out. This was not an easy scene to plan.
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I can see why. One always wants scenes like that to come out just right.
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Weyrling Masters in your comics are always so much cooler than the ones I get to role play. D=
The epicness. You have it. I do not. -praises comic-
And I like that K'mlar looks "younger" in the last panel. It shows how I imagine he feels. "Me...? Lead them? ... [I can't/I'm too young/I'm not ready for this/I'll never be ready for this/etc.]"
So I like it.
The one crit I have is just to watch your positioning on the mouths. I know it's your style to have the lip shapes off to the side of the "mouth" opening, and that's fine. Just make sure the top of the mouth and the bottom of the top lip line up. ^^
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wow... i love where its going. btw... pgs 3 and 8 dont have "next page" links
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Sorry about that, fixed now.
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All the suspense... and it crumbles. Poor K'mlar. D:
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